yea.... go crazy. And read it. EH ALMOST DONE ALMOST DONE!!!!!!!!!!!! i didn't really try on my portion so don't point any grammatical errors... cuz i really don't care at this point.
woah! that was pretty intense stuff right there...
Marc is an idiot. and Cadee is too for following him. * sigh * but i guess that's just how they react to situations like that...hehe i'm gonna have lots of fun with the first fight scene...
Ooooo, and CALEB GOT KNOCKED OUT!!!!!!! haha, Alek is so powerful...mhhhmmmm, way cool, except when Cass and Emily are outside the window and can't do anything...
but! i love how they get to "save the day" that was way cool! and i have to say...Cassidy was getting a little creepy in the car...haha
well...it wasn't alek's power. It was Talon, and all the other distractions that allowed Alek to break through Caleb's defenses. However when he tried to break through by himself, it didn't work.
cassidy is reflecting how hysterical i was getting while trying to finish that chapter. But seriously, Emily could if she wanted to... hehe, Caleb wouldn't like that though, would he? AND she might die.... hehe... * evil laugh *
why wouldn't caleb like that? and question...if Emily could become a light...does that mean that caleb could become a dark? I mean he has black hair, pale skin...what else qualifies?
well... most LIKELY emily would die. Considering she's in the future, her blood line is probably obscenely tainted with nasty human blood and she couldn't go through with the scary process. :D Caleb.... probably the same as emily. Navy blue eyes are just weird though. I don't know what that would do... actually i bet he has a better chance than emily. Wait, what color are HER eyes? O.o
and uh... Caleb wouldn't like it cuz she would like.. die. heh
and... i'm not going to release the process of "the change" for a while... wait, no, actually once Cassidy is surrounded by more darks, it'll become known. :D that's like not too far off! yay!!
And Zeke doesn't know whats going on Stephen!!!!! I bet the same thing could happen to Caleb. yup. and your right about the whole whore thing, ugh she's a bee. I don't like Erika AT ALL.
hmmm, but she is fun to write about...haha. oh! and just a small reminder!
THERE'S ONLY *3ISH WEEKS LEFT OF SCHOOL* ahah! :D that makes me so happy...
Emily's eyes are green. Who cares...her blood is probably really tainted cuz not only is she human, but she has a 'gift'. ALSO! Caleb's blood is like super pure...super...he doesn't know it yet...but if he had a blood transfusion with someone, like if he donated blood, it would cure any disease/cancer/sickness. or wait...does that make it unpure? idk? Caleb's mind is too strong to be seduced by the likes of Whore Erika...
oh just wait...just wait...he'll meet his match...and more... AND! If our characters are supposed to be flawed...does that mean that Matthew could be seduced the whore?
Hey hey, Caleb could totally be seduced by her...considering he fell to Alek and Talon...so i'm going with it's a possiblity...he can't just be this super character. he has to fall at one point.
why yes of course. that is if cassidy doesn't kill her first. --.--
but i still don't know the mechanics at just how POWERFUL her mind is.... cuz matt is supposed to be stronger than both the light and dark races, im just wondering what Erika's limit is, mental wise. :D
my characters don't need that stuff. they can do it on their own :D cause they're just cool like that. a few people could break through Zeke's just cuz they can--like maybe Alek. if he tries hard enough. and Caleb of course can...But Cadee's is different. She's * special * hehe
and and! The whole thing is * pleasure * with her. not just seducing whoever she wants. Like she can make people feel like they did good, or want to do better...yeah, its not all bad, what she can do anyway...
The Spoof is an amazing, very interesting story. What might happen when all the familiar characters you know from "Nightshade" "The Rings" & "Astral" collide?
Read--authors Stephen and Katie. Ideas also from Dani C.
woah! that was pretty intense stuff right there...
ReplyDeleteMarc is an idiot. and Cadee is too for following him. * sigh * but i guess that's just how they react to situations like that...hehe i'm gonna have lots of fun with the first fight scene...
Ooooo, and CALEB GOT KNOCKED OUT!!!!!!! haha, Alek is so powerful...mhhhmmmm, way cool, except when Cass and Emily are outside the window and can't do anything...
but! i love how they get to "save the day"
that was way cool! and i have to say...Cassidy was getting a little creepy in the car...haha
Intense!!!
ReplyDeletewell...it wasn't alek's power. It was Talon, and all the other distractions that allowed Alek to break through Caleb's defenses. However when he tried to break through by himself, it didn't work.
Yes...Cass was getting a bit creepy thar...
cassidy is reflecting how hysterical i was getting while trying to finish that chapter. But seriously, Emily could if she wanted to... hehe, Caleb wouldn't like that though, would he? AND she might die.... hehe... * evil laugh *
ReplyDeletewhy wouldn't caleb like that?
ReplyDeleteand question...if Emily could become a light...does that mean that caleb could become a dark? I mean he has black hair, pale skin...what else qualifies?
ehhh...i'm curious...will we know how Cass became a dark soon?? O.O i'm interested...hehe
ReplyDeleteumm, and Caleb still go knocked out...so hah.
And i'm starting to get excited to write in the next spoof! yeah, its gonna be fun. haha
At least Caleb didn't get seduced and manipulated by a whore...hehe
ReplyDeleteyes you should be excited! It's gonna be AWESOME!!!
well... most LIKELY emily would die. Considering she's in the future, her blood line is probably obscenely tainted with nasty human blood and she couldn't go through with the scary process. :D
ReplyDeleteCaleb.... probably the same as emily. Navy blue eyes are just weird though. I don't know what that would do... actually i bet he has a better chance than emily. Wait, what color are HER eyes? O.o
and uh... Caleb wouldn't like it cuz she would like.. die. heh
and... i'm not going to release the process of "the change" for a while... wait, no, actually once Cassidy is surrounded by more darks, it'll become known. :D that's like not too far off! yay!!
Okay!!!
ReplyDeleteAnd Zeke doesn't know whats going on Stephen!!!!! I bet the same thing could happen to Caleb. yup. and your right about the whole whore thing, ugh she's a bee. I don't like Erika AT ALL.
hmmm, but she is fun to write about...haha. oh! and just a small reminder!
THERE'S ONLY *3ISH WEEKS LEFT OF SCHOOL* ahah! :D that makes me so happy...
Emily's eyes are green.
ReplyDeleteWho cares...her blood is probably really tainted cuz not only is she human, but she has a 'gift'.
ALSO! Caleb's blood is like super pure...super...he doesn't know it yet...but if he had a blood transfusion with someone, like if he donated blood, it would cure any disease/cancer/sickness.
or wait...does that make it unpure? idk?
Caleb's mind is too strong to be seduced by the likes of Whore Erika...
Depends of the transfuser. But still, it depends on if his blood was only MIXED or if it was altered completely.
ReplyDeleteI KNOW YESTERDAY WAS THE LAST MONDAY!!! :D
* again, caleb is the all mighty. Allow no flaws mar his perfect existance!!! *
ReplyDeleteeyes roll.
oh just wait...just wait...he'll meet his match...and more...
ReplyDeleteAND! If our characters are supposed to be flawed...does that mean that Matthew could be seduced the whore?
Hey hey, Caleb could totally be seduced by her...considering he fell to Alek and Talon...so i'm going with it's a possiblity...he can't just be this super character. he has to fall at one point.
ReplyDeletewhy yes of course. that is if cassidy doesn't kill her first. --.--
ReplyDeletebut i still don't know the mechanics at just how POWERFUL her mind is.... cuz matt is supposed to be stronger than both the light and dark races, im just wondering what Erika's limit is, mental wise. :D
Caleb is not a super character...soon to be revealed in ASTRAL!!!
ReplyDeleteha...i should probably post the next chapta sometime...
it would help if the enemies in the spoof had thought armor or thought scramblers...
ReplyDeletemy characters don't need that stuff. they can do it on their own :D cause they're just cool like that. a few people could break through Zeke's just cuz they can--like maybe Alek. if he tries hard enough. and Caleb of course can...But Cadee's is different. She's * special * hehe
ReplyDeleteOh, and Erika has no idea whatsoever that people can read her mind. None of the evil people do.
ReplyDeleteand and! The whole thing is * pleasure * with her. not just seducing whoever she wants. Like she can make people feel like they did good, or want to do better...yeah, its not all bad, what she can do anyway...
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